Review Detail of Dev_013 in I Can Extract Everything

well you have got nice concept but I can't say you are describing the story according to it...there are so many mistakes in just this few chp.. the no of points differs so much and you explaining the stuff to much...just read the other cultivation novel as reference or something... I just giving advice cause bro u r writing the story with quite the effort there don't just write it like that ... one more point pls keep the no in status steady don't make it inconsistent... nd keep techniques name same don't change it by chapters...