Review Detail of Zackary_Zhangcheng in The Grandmaster's Rebirth

The story itself has great potential, and the patchwork is all there. The placement of dialogue, inner monologue, and descriptions is all very well done. That being said, however, the writing style needs a bit of work. The tense is all over the place. There have been instances in which it changed between past, present, and future within a single paragraph. I suggest that you take the time to fix this before moving on.