Review Detail of Rival789 in Warlock of the Magus World – Redux

Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters