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Rival789

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  • Rival789
    Rival7891mth
    Commented

    John Wick> Cyberpunk> Others. Just to get more jump points and get his factory updated even more before he starts to tangle with more esoteric powers.

    Ch 25 Next Jump Vote
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    When The Facade Breaks (A Jumpchain Story)
    Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891mth
    Replied to House_Bread

    I can't recall any HS DxD fics were Rias is just left to fend for herself. Someone always saves her, and it would be nice for a change of pace.

    Ch 89 Chapter [89]
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    DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex
    Anime & Comics · Mirko22
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891mth
    Commented

    And here is me foreshadowing that the MC will save Rias, and she will fall in love with him and be in his harem going forward. Can you just not do that?

    Ch 89 Chapter [89]
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    DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex
    Anime & Comics · Mirko22
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  • Rival789
    Rival7897mth
    Commented

    I think I like it because it ISN'T focused on Konoha or the Naruto timeline. IIRC, Uzushio was destroyed around the second shinobi war, if the MC can learn sealing arts, could probably get some goodies from them, or he could defect to Uzu and help save them. Lots of options going forward, will the MC play the Paragon path or Renegade?

    Ch 1 Rebirth (I)
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    Extreme Affinity
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • Rival789
    Rival7897mth
    Commented

    He definitely needs to figure out which relationship he's going to pursue, or he will be a victim of one of T. Swift's famous ex-bf songs. You'd think he would have known that prior to getting involved with her. It's one thing to be in a relationship with a singer and it ends, it's another when she sings about you cheating on her. Or, he could just be single and date around. Either way, he needs to fix it or it is going to be embarrassing.

    Ch 144 Chapter 144: Charity Concert (1)
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    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
    TV · Alittlepiggy33
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  • Rival789
    Rival7897mth
    Replied to Rival789

    Forgort to add this, but if he is a certified ruler, he will be able to give 100% credence to whether Jesus of Nazareth was a real person or just made up hog wash. It would especially be true when he is still alive an kicking well after Jesus died. Just remember though for future chapters, 536 AD was probably the worst year in human history: https://www.cnn.com/2018/11/20/health/worst-year-536-scli-intl/index.html#:~:text=A%20massive%20volcanic%20eruption%20spewed,of%20Nottingham%20in%20the%20UK.

    Ch 13 To much gold and a new holiday
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    The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
    Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
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  • Rival789
    Rival7897mth
    Commented

    Just started reading this and I have binged it. I love this! Such an interesting and unique take on every single ME FF out there.

    Ch 39 Interesting Times - Chapter 39
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    Interesting Times
    Video Games · Zanarkand_Kido
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  • Rival789
    Rival7898mth
    Commented

    It still irks me how the MC is all " woe is you, I'm sowwy for killing you" when every reality he goes to is a doomed one that will be destroyed. It literally doesn't matter what he does in them, as low and behold, they will end regardless of his actions.

    Ch 157 Speedrun 10
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    Multiversal Library
    Anime & Comics · ExoticSenta
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Commented

    I like the story, but MC has broken the first rule and benefit of multiversal travel: getting a harem.

    Ch 87 DXD 5
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    Multiversal Library
    Anime & Comics · ExoticSenta
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Commented

    Not all chapters need to be a manifesto, sometimes a nice 1-2k chapter with slice of life and warm and fuzzies is good as well

    Ch 71 Ch71. Homecoming
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    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Posted

    Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters

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    Warlock of the Magus World – Redux
    Anime & Comics · TunaSandwichAddict
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Replied to Rival789

    500*500=250,000 in a 1 hour block 250,000*10 =2,500,000 per day @ 10 hours a day 2,500,000*365=912,500,000 @365 days of continuous operations

    Ch 61 Ch61. Tony's profitable ventures
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    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Replied to Avarath123

    The math checks out. if you figure it takes 45 minutes to 'cure' and the other 15 minutes in a one-hour block is used for getting a patient in/out of the cradle and getting a new patient in, you would get 5000 people in a day if you only do it for 10 hours.

    Ch 61 Ch61. Tony's profitable ventures
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    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Commented

    The Essence of the Archmage is fucking OP and I love it. If he ever goes under a secondary mutation late in the story, Essence of the Blank should be next, those two combined make for a terrifying existence.

    Ch 64 *The-Chapter-Unnamed (II)*
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
    Movies · InGlorious
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Posted

    The author REALLY needs to look over his writing before posting. The author can't seem to remember that male characters use he/his/him and female characters use she/her/hers, it is constantly switching back and forth between the two. Once or twice would be a mistake, at this point, it almost feels malicious with how often it happens. The MC comes across as a one-dimensional cringey edge lord and is really hard to like him.

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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Replied to NightOwl_Soren

    Life is pessimistic and depressing

    Ch 1 Ch1. Prologue 1
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    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Commented

    Glad that you are back. There aren't many Tony Stark "fix-it" fics and I'm excited to see where you take the story.

    Ch 1 Ch1. Prologue 1
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    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Replied to Dao_of_Lazy

    reported for being a douche canoe

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    From the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Rival789
    Rival7891yr
    Commented

    Good luck with your future endeavors. I have genuinely enjoyed your stories.

    Ch 98 Burned out.
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    Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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