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I think I like it because it ISN'T focused on Konoha or the Naruto timeline. IIRC, Uzushio was destroyed around the second shinobi war, if the MC can learn sealing arts, could probably get some goodies from them, or he could defect to Uzu and help save them. Lots of options going forward, will the MC play the Paragon path or Renegade?
He definitely needs to figure out which relationship he's going to pursue, or he will be a victim of one of T. Swift's famous ex-bf songs. You'd think he would have known that prior to getting involved with her. It's one thing to be in a relationship with a singer and it ends, it's another when she sings about you cheating on her. Or, he could just be single and date around. Either way, he needs to fix it or it is going to be embarrassing.
Forgort to add this, but if he is a certified ruler, he will be able to give 100% credence to whether Jesus of Nazareth was a real person or just made up hog wash. It would especially be true when he is still alive an kicking well after Jesus died. Just remember though for future chapters, 536 AD was probably the worst year in human history: https://www.cnn.com/2018/11/20/health/worst-year-536-scli-intl/index.html#:~:text=A%20massive%20volcanic%20eruption%20spewed,of%20Nottingham%20in%20the%20UK.
Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters
The math checks out. if you figure it takes 45 minutes to 'cure' and the other 15 minutes in a one-hour block is used for getting a patient in/out of the cradle and getting a new patient in, you would get 5000 people in a day if you only do it for 10 hours.
The author REALLY needs to look over his writing before posting. The author can't seem to remember that male characters use he/his/him and female characters use she/her/hers, it is constantly switching back and forth between the two. Once or twice would be a mistake, at this point, it almost feels malicious with how often it happens. The MC comes across as a one-dimensional cringey edge lord and is really hard to like him.