Item: Short Horror Stories
Rating: 5
Author: Taiwolilly

TaiwolillyLv23yr

2021-03-22 21:44

I really enjoyed reading this and I commend you as a fellow thriller writer. A few edits need to be made here and there and there's a method to the suspense. Use senses, emotions to incite fear and anxiety in your readers. You actually did that but the first story seemed a bit prolonged as we were waiting for the creature to do something for a long while but it was awesome nonetheless.😉

Short Horror Stories

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