Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Asteria:into the land of Zoa

The world building is good here. The writing is decent but there are some grammatical choices that are a bit confusing. The updates are consistent. The story develops well, and a lot of the characters have cool names. One thing I'd like to see more is visual description of what characters and the environment look like. This story is an interesting tale all-in-all that I think readers can take a lot away from. To the author: I welcome you to explore and add a review to my story "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" (AMJ). You may want to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ to not feel totally lost. Cheers