I haven't read the Indonesian ver but from what I read so far plus the blurb, the plot seems interesting! One thing from me is I found some Indonesian word that haven't been edited, maybe you miss them when you edited the chapter before posting them. Some of the words you chose not really fit the context but it's okay. English is hard and I'm still learning too. I recommend using grammarly to help you proofread 🥰 Good job author! Keep writing 💕💕
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