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GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv143yr
2021-12-26 03:04

It had a very good synopsis but it doesent match with the story in, 1. quality 2. grammatical structure 3. no back story at all 4. poor definition Im being generous with the rating. Learn from youre mistakes.

Sword Of Chaos

ShadowKatake
4.8
164 Chs

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ShadowKatake
ShadowKatakeAuthor

I do agree that now, it doesn't match with the synopsis. I haven't focused with backstories since some readers find it as fillers. Volume one is focusing on his rise from weak to strong while I am planning that volume two will be more in depth world background and backstories. It depends on the reader's opinion since not everyone is like you who will openly criticize me. I am grateful that you told me about that since if you didn't, some readers might misunderstand that the synopsis is only clickbait. Btw, how many chapters of my novel have you read to reach that conclusion?

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GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

a promising author

ShadowKatake:I do agree that now, it doesn't match with the synopsis. I haven't focused with backstories since some readers find it as fillers. Volume one is focusing on his rise from weak to strong while I am planning that volume two will be more in depth world background and backstories. It depends on the reader's opinion since not everyone is like you who will openly criticize me. I am grateful that you told me about that since if you didn't, some readers might misunderstand that the synopsis is only clickbait. Btw, how many chapters of my novel have you read to reach that conclusion?
3yr
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I give you my support here, the start is really interesting and well written, keep going it's a good work you are doing with this story, it has potential and I'm sure that it will improve as it will be released :)

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Mage_Of_Chaos
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I love the storyline and the mc is a sword is kinda unique. instead of his owner being reincarnated and his story being narrated, his sword is the mc of the novel. the mc is kinda powerful but I believe that more cultivators are much more powerful than him.

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This is a great book with a lot of potentials. the character design is good. The plotline is great. but can you tell how did the sword nod when it was not in its human form? 🙄🙄 Nice book! I'm looking for the book.😎😎😎🌹

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Interesting story that I ever read it. The story is good and cool. Keep writing. Fighting! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Okay. So in my free time I read books about romance, but now I discovered that this world full of action and magic. I like it, but I want more details about what is happening in this book.

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LivingVoid
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The Writing Quality is good but can be improved ( not that i am an expert :P ) the Story development is going fast for now which i like and the world background is also unique as there are also monster with intelligent life and have their own way to live just like humans. The Characters are swords as you can see from the title which is unique imo. Good luck in your journey Author. xD

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Zerga3
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You get my supports for this one. The story development is fast, but still doesn’t miss the small parts. The sword is also unique and interesting.

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The 'sword' got me curious you know. Good novel, I didn't expect something like this. I'll definitely add this to my library. Keep up the good work.

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Aye! The premise is interesting hehe! :D I enjoyed reading a story about a sword that was trying to reach a higher level hehe! Writing-wise, it's nice, grammar and punctuation are great :D I also loved the world-building hehe! It was pretty detailed, and I could see that the author had put a lot of thought into ittt Great job, author! <3

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