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LivingVoid
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2021-01-29 17:04

The Writing Quality is good but can be improved ( not that i am an expert :P ) the Story development is going fast for now which i like and the world background is also unique as there are also monster with intelligent life and have their own way to live just like humans. The Characters are swords as you can see from the title which is unique imo. Good luck in your journey Author. xD

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ShadowKatake
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Thank you and yes I'm not that an expert in writing and it doesn't mean if you get a 97 in your English grade and 98 in your grammar means that you are good at writing. The story is fast for now but will get moderate speed in the later chapters or updates.

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