this story is great so far. please do NOT make it a harem. my two cents harems are unrealistic no man or woman would be willing to share their loved one with someone else. it tends to ruin a story. choose one love interest and stick with it that way the story and characters can be more developed. also please dont drop. it's always sad when good stories are dropped.

The rewrite feels far smoother than the original.The start of the story has been added to quite a bit.The original start was quite rushed. I look forward to what other changes you do to the original.

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Honestly so far this rewrite is a lot smoother too read, I noticed a few thing's that were different but I would need to go and reread the original to actually find what they were if that makes sense. (Retroactively applying starts from what I know from the original)

okay dude I am not happy with you I mean I understand that you don't want to continue this but literally if you were just going to sit there and brighten it up you could have just brightened up the one that you had done already wrote I'm I get tired of every time I find it good Harry Potter fanfiction where the character is Merlin and really half the time they do 50 chapters and drop it just like you're doing you're dropping this after so long and to be honest I like you so much that I gave a lot of like the I voted a lot for your stuff because I really thought hey if I voted more you would sit there and update it some more but to this point I'm not happy I'm like I understand that you want to drop it but at the end of the day why can't you just transfer ownership because not letting someone else finish it kind of makes me upset because as a person at read it and really loved it and was like craving for more and more like a lot of these Fanfictions I always forget what I've read and I really liked him yours has always stuck in my mind because I really liked it I like the mystery I can't find much mystery around my Harry Potter Fanfictions I like that he was a descendant of Merlin I also like the fact that he wouldn't roll over for Dumbledore and he was also a black character and at this point it's like I don't know if you're if you if you're going to drop this and you sit there and already done a 100 one but you drop this just because you ain't updated I don't know if I can trust you as an author because I don't know if you're going to update on anything else you post I'm not trying to be mean but I really liked your story and I have to give like the world background of three after this point because you didn't sit there and updated if you would have done more chapters character design Flawless store development I gave you a one because you ain't developed the story and over 3 months and now you're dropping it the same goes for your writing quality you're writing quality was through the race I thought that was good so I don't know if I'm going to continue to follow you and to be honest if anyone else feels the way I think you should comment on what I have to say because doesn't it for me as a person not trying to come out as rude but like half the time for me and I don't know if y'all when we get a good fanfiction that is something when you're looking for something involving Merlin and with Harry Potter they do like 50 chapters and then I just oh I'm not going to continue it either that's on here or on WhatsApp or webinarville

Bland boring cliched and stupid to the core. Avada kadavra to this fanfic. wouldn't recommend this to anybody. wasted my time reading this BS

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Author is doing a good job, his previous FF was great with millions of views and this is a rewrite, so I'm recommending this, other things you need to know: if you have any criticism about this rewrite, then read the OG book, you'll understand the improvement.

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