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wolfman314
wolfman314Lv142yr
2022-03-14 04:50

iam likeing the re-write the Canon shift will bring up some interesting changes 🤔 and I can't wait to see where it leads loved the other story.

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JayFireblood
JayFirebloodLv15

agreed im curious about how it works on a global scale like with events that would happen in the background

CasualDegenerate
CasualDegenerateLv4

True especially with an already masterpeice of a novel

JayFireblood:agreed im curious about how it works on a global scale like with events that would happen in the background
acasualreader
acasualreaderLv4

Hope he isn't used as a tool by Salazar again.

Tyler_Baker_4067
Tyler_Baker_4067Lv2

first off I love your book I did try to read the first one and to me I sort of blocked it and disliked it this one I like that it's his friends and the owl is still involved and you know what works for and more outside of school and you know what there's more of a relationship with the caretaker and all that stuff and I really really like that to be honest moving forward I would really like for for the the character that we're talking about just my thoughts on it to have a separate house and it be Cottage also I think it'd be really cool you know there's been a lot of Harry Potter fanfics and everything and usually have the time it's either evolving Harry Potter or it's evolving one of the main characters or one of the side characters in the book To be honest I would really like for someone this is just my thoughts to write a book on a muggle born that is reborn into Harry Potter but not during the time of Voldemort I would really like it to be in the time before I mean before Grindelwald and you know what I really would like for this person to you know being the US and and Hendra Grindelwald and people trying to figure out who he is or at least a descendant of Merlin or something of that nature but it'd be half blood not a pure blood and you know like you know a lot of these people they want to give the creep like I understand that we would love to have a magical anime cuz I mean I would love to have a magical anime against if I was a wizard I think it would be really cool for it to be something very common that is in the Wizarding World it'd be very hard to figure out the person especially if you're not registered so if you really want to look at it I think an owl and a Magus or some type of Eagle would be the best animagus to have because you could get out of certain situations don't really care for the wand or anything but those were my thoughts on it also it's really hard to find any character with LGBT as a main character that is gay as a person myself I am gay but I think it is really cool that you know what even though this person is probably straight throughout the series in my opinion I still like the book I mean I like the funniness I like the quick quick wittiness of it I also like the fact that you know what he can joke and stuff like that also his sister makes me laugh I'm sorry the sister is so funny it's not even funny I mean he Shivers you don't even know who it is but I mean literally you've influenced this girl I mean to be I mean I would be terrified to face this girl and battle I mean she kind of like semi kind of Bellatrix crazy but not to the cruelty you know what I mean also you know what it would make more sense for him to have a safe house outside of the of the UK when stuff goes bad also be really cool for you to make the person make bunkers for mobile warrants to hide when Voldemort starts showing back up

Sue_D_Nymn
Sue_D_NymnLv15

Wall of Text= Bad. Do it over!

Tyler_Baker_4067:first off I love your book I did try to read the first one and to me I sort of blocked it and disliked it this one I like that it's his friends and the owl is still involved and you know what works for and more outside of school and you know what there's more of a relationship with the caretaker and all that stuff and I really really like that to be honest moving forward I would really like for for the the character that we're talking about just my thoughts on it to have a separate house and it be Cottage also I think it'd be really cool you know there's been a lot of Harry Potter fanfics and everything and usually have the time it's either evolving Harry Potter or it's evolving one of the main characters or one of the side characters in the book To be honest I would really like for someone this is just my thoughts to write a book on a muggle born that is reborn into Harry Potter but not during the time of Voldemort I would really like it to be in the time before I mean before Grindelwald and you know what I really would like for this person to you know being the US and and Hendra Grindelwald and people trying to figure out who he is or at least a descendant of Merlin or something of that nature but it'd be half blood not a pure blood and you know like you know a lot of these people they want to give the creep like I understand that we would love to have a magical anime cuz I mean I would love to have a magical anime against if I was a wizard I think it would be really cool for it to be something very common that is in the Wizarding World it'd be very hard to figure out the person especially if you're not registered so if you really want to look at it I think an owl and a Magus or some type of Eagle would be the best animagus to have because you could get out of certain situations don't really care for the wand or anything but those were my thoughts on it also it's really hard to find any character with LGBT as a main character that is gay as a person myself I am gay but I think it is really cool that you know what even though this person is probably straight throughout the series in my opinion I still like the book I mean I like the funniness I like the quick quick wittiness of it I also like the fact that you know what he can joke and stuff like that also his sister makes me laugh I'm sorry the sister is so funny it's not even funny I mean he Shivers you don't even know who it is but I mean literally you've influenced this girl I mean to be I mean I would be terrified to face this girl and battle I mean she kind of like semi kind of Bellatrix crazy but not to the cruelty you know what I mean also you know what it would make more sense for him to have a safe house outside of the of the UK when stuff goes bad also be really cool for you to make the person make bunkers for mobile warrants to hide when Voldemort starts showing back up
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Tyler_Baker_3884
Tyler_Baker_3884Lv4

okay dude I am not happy with you I mean I understand that you don't want to continue this but literally if you were just going to sit there and brighten it up you could have just brightened up the one that you had done already wrote I'm I get tired of every time I find it good Harry Potter fanfiction where the character is Merlin and really half the time they do 50 chapters and drop it just like you're doing you're dropping this after so long and to be honest I like you so much that I gave a lot of like the I voted a lot for your stuff because I really thought hey if I voted more you would sit there and update it some more but to this point I'm not happy I'm like I understand that you want to drop it but at the end of the day why can't you just transfer ownership because not letting someone else finish it kind of makes me upset because as a person at read it and really loved it and was like craving for more and more like a lot of these Fanfictions I always forget what I've read and I really liked him yours has always stuck in my mind because I really liked it I like the mystery I can't find much mystery around my Harry Potter Fanfictions I like that he was a descendant of Merlin I also like the fact that he wouldn't roll over for Dumbledore and he was also a black character and at this point it's like I don't know if you're if you if you're going to drop this and you sit there and already done a 100 one but you drop this just because you ain't updated I don't know if I can trust you as an author because I don't know if you're going to update on anything else you post I'm not trying to be mean but I really liked your story and I have to give like the world background of three after this point because you didn't sit there and updated if you would have done more chapters character design Flawless store development I gave you a one because you ain't developed the story and over 3 months and now you're dropping it the same goes for your writing quality you're writing quality was through the race I thought that was good so I don't know if I'm going to continue to follow you and to be honest if anyone else feels the way I think you should comment on what I have to say because doesn't it for me as a person not trying to come out as rude but like half the time for me and I don't know if y'all when we get a good fanfiction that is something when you're looking for something involving Merlin and with Harry Potter they do like 50 chapters and then I just oh I'm not going to continue it either that's on here or on WhatsApp or webinarville

Virdan_snek
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