Review Detail of Boroxx in Flowery Bastard Winning at Life

Awesome idea, Awesome execution, Awesome use of underused characters, Awesome use of an already existing world and i can name many other good things about this story. However... The interacting between characters is non existant to the point meetings between the MC and others is done within 1 sentence while the rest is glossed over, more often than not your not even giving a description of the characters like fem Vali for example and its just killing the story for me where characters exchange like 3/4 words and 2 paragraphs later they have been friends for months. Fill out your character interactions like writing them talking about some every day nonsense to flesh them out more and show some of their tought proccesses as not only will this make the interactions less robotic and fake it will also put on a break on the extremely fast pacing currently as it feels like the MC is literaly jumping from point A to point B right now where i as reader barely have a clue whats going on anymore as the interactions and toughts of the characters are getting glossed over Atleast this is my opinion Overall the rest is good and i enjoy reading it Keep up the good work