Review Detail of Benoit_Valtin in Marvel: Psychomimetic

another novel with reviews to buy. You are in such a rush to write that you skip a lot of events that can build the MC, but you ignored that. Worse still, you forget to introduce him to important minds, and don't even shake hands with Charles Xavier O_O. We don't even know the name of his parents and how his abilities work, so I can say that it's impossible for this novel to become famous if we don't rewrite it from the beginning with most of the details of his life to build his character