Review Detail of SAGE in Marvel: Psychomimetic

Item: Marvel: Psychomimetic
Rating: 2

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SAGELv23yrSAGE

Man, you are in a hurry to write and miss many events that can build our knowledge about MC, but you ignored that. We do not even know the name of his parents and how his abilities work, so I can say that it is impossible for this novel to become famous if you do not rewrite it from the beginning with most of the details of his life to build his character

Marvel: Psychomimetic

king_frosh

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king_froshAuthorking_frosh

bro am a lazy writer so sorry for disappointing you though thank you for the advice

3yr

CodeZeroZeroLv13CodeZeroZero

Is this a harem?

king_frosh:bro am a lazy writer so sorry for disappointing you though thank you for the advice

3yr

king_froshAuthorking_frosh

was supposed to be until I grew and realized just how much potential this book had then went on to start rewriting it to make a little more sense

CodeZeroZero:Is this a harem?

1yr

proganerx_DaveLv4proganerx_Dave

you could Re-make the story will all the new information on the story.

king_frosh:bro am a lazy writer so sorry for disappointing you though thank you for the advice

10mth

king_froshAuthorking_frosh

plan to but i am busy for now and i also plan to finish the book first then rewrite it

proganerx_Dave:you could Re-make the story will all the new information on the story.

10mth