I have finished the story now on to the review. The story itself had a ton of potential. A lot of of avenue’e the author could have explored were either unfufilled or alluded to. The pacing my gosh the pacing! Welp I am for slow paced stories done right this is not the case. Too many filler moment’s and charcter interaction’s that should have progressed the story, which unfortuantly did not. I believe reasearch moment’s could have been glossed over. The focus on charcter interaction’s particular the girl’s felt dare I say felt forced and not as organic as the author thought it was. The will they or won’t they scenario get’s old fast. I do not like a rushed story mind you. However prolonging or expounding on interaction’s, which are either trivial or don’t play a larger role later leave’s much to be desired. The only charcter which I appreciated the most was Benard out of all people. Him being the voice of reason yet is ingnored either by the MC or the author. The irony is the author write’s his charcter knowing the romance is being dragged through the mud. The Mc being dense like a rock or willfully ingnorant of girl’s potential feeling’s. Did I mention that he is a practically a 40 year old man giving Norman and the transmigrator’s age put together. Giving the impression of middle aged man vibes. Though I wish their was no harem it seem redudant and forced. The MC was a robot his emotion’s either being mute or talking when needed. Like the Mc is huh I’ll guess I’ll talk to remind people I have emotion’s and win the audience by my “fathering” of Harry. Another complaint is the underutilzation of the Spider man spider’s which are available day one though MC never approach’s them till 80+ chaps though that never get’s anywhere. The simplest power up squandered giving vauge reason’s of the web of destiny which may or may not exist. Even if it did may not have been detrimental. Overall the abysmal pacing, the forced non-existant harem. Indecisive and ignorant on love MC with robot like emotion’s. Squandered opportunities. With the Deus ex machina Lux the entity that preserves the MC even though he should have die. MC having a random pure soul that is never elaborated on making Lady Death obessed. Meaning he’s alway’s protected. Faces minimal challenges or struggles if at all. Author can’t make up his mind where he want’s to go with his story. Alright that is all hoped this helped anyone that is all peace.
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