Very dope. Norman SI? never read one before. The powers could be improved upon. interested to see what happens and how he'd use em to rival the top tier. Norman was smart, or at least cunning and a planner [ minus the insanity ], would like to see this. His plans, the progress of it and the execution rather than just mentioning it in one para and moving on, like most ff;s. And would prefer a non heroic MC or chaotic neutral MC or even a villain. cause for obvious reasons. But if heroic dont make him the midoriya type. Any relationships, try to build over a period of time instead of rushing it in weeks/days. And show the progress instead of rushing it overall really like the idea, its dope. suggestions: magic. make him a speedster or atleast some power of that type. suits his theme, and power and skill. GL

What the hell man this is amazing I expected it to be good but not this good. The pace is really good. I have a feeling MC will have two wives lucky harry, he won't complain having 2 mothers haha. Would be a shame if author drops this.

Great idea and I liked the novel. Writing Quality is very good. Story development is a little shaky in my opinion but it's still going well so far. The Character design however is bad, the author specifically stated that the mc has emotions of the original Norman but I see no shred of resemblances of the original Norman Osborn neither the comics(616 or any other) nor the cartoons or movie versions for that matter. On top of that it's a harem novel so I didn't hold out much hope for the novel, come on a harem in a modern United States and the person in question is famous buisness man, even with all the weird shit that happens in Marvel this is just stupid. Updating stability is good. World background is ok.

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Harem suggestion Natasha Romanoff Captain Marvel Felicia hardy blackcat Gwen Stacy Mary Jane Watson Gamora (Thanos adapted daughter) Instead of Pokémon harem with forced plot I hope for more romantic developments and slowly building up relationships base on trust and slowly development With every girl to the point that all girl won't give up on mc for any other one Even accepted harem thing instead of losing Mc.... Also Mc should be cool enough to attract all those women to him I hope he keep his silent behavior with very little words... Actions speak lauder than any words I hope Mc take the theam of acting like John wick very silent very deadly john wick the boogeyman

When I started to read this fanfiction I was kind of bummed how the author realized conversation flow and how he marked it but later in the story, he changed and improved it (it's still not perfect and lots of times there is too much of she said he said or equivalent, so my tip is to just start a conversation with she said to know who starts it between them and then just write he shouted or so when necessary ). The story is good and even if I think there is a lot of potential still there, I need to remember that it's only the beginning. The author still deserves a 5-star review. So in short in my opinion if the conversation flow is improved one of the biggest mistakes that in my opinion turns a lot of new readers away is fixed and I would love if you (the author) would go back to earlier chapters and overwork the old conversation flow to make make it easier for new readers to join and enjoy your work.

Very good fiction I hope you won't stop it I hope Mc keep his cold a calm and very silent behavior and this cool personality He just keep his emotions inside His actions explain his real Nobel inside No hero route nor a evildoer But something like a anti-hero act like a godfather or something like that If there is harem I suggest Natasha Romanoff Mary Gwen Stacy Felicia hardy Captain Marvel If possible Gamora (Thanos daughter) Please focus more on romantic plot in building this harem I hate Pokémon harem that all about forced plot

I haven't read it yet but just from the fact that the mc isn't a total psychopath it's already above 99,99% of the fic on this website keep doing that. I really hate webnovels culture where every mc has to be a violent psycopath who can't be nice or help somebody without being called a beta while all the comments when a female character is introduced is to type R*pe her

OK,So..... I'm just gonna give this 3.8stars cuz the author was kind enough to explain a bit 'bout this fanfiction in the"Read it" chapter (NOW IF U R WONDERING WHAT I MEAN BY "Read it" CHAPTER , ITS THE CHAPTER BEFORE THE FIRST CHAPTER STARTS) And m gonna be honest i dont like these kind of plots. NOW IF U R WONDERING WHAT I MEAN BY"these kind of plots", The protagonist is already a DAD!!*take a deep breath* *take a deep breath* *calm down* (dude m still 17!!,well i just like to fantasize myself as the protagonist so yeah it just scares me to fantasise that i already have a kid <its scary, believe me>)and there are a bunch of seals on your "OP POWERS"(yeah ,M BEING SARCASTIC,FIGHT ME!) (i hope you guys don't get offended and even if u do m gonna say it anyways THIS IS SIMPLY DOGSH*T!!!) ],so.... yeah m sorry but m not daring enough to read this one I HOPE U GUYS FIND URSELF A GF SOON SO THAT U DONT HAVE ENOUGH TIME TO WASTE SO MUCH TIME ON A SH*TTY COMMENT LIKE THIS ONE PEACE!