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Xephotor
XephotorLv123yrXephotor

[Insert obligatory grammar snark here.] The author puts much effort into the voices of their characters. This is best exemplified by the protagonist, who is not another generic baby genius #2134. The story is well thought out and the world built around it is interesting. I look forward to see how the protagonist will grow as the story progresses.

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Please transfer to the contracted JoLiBe Tara!! To support me…

EzyGuLaky

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Xephotor
XephotorLv12Xephotor

Its just something I put in my reviews to mention that grammar mistakes are present . I don’t like nitpicking grammar since the story is more valuable. Grammar improves as you read and write more so don’t worry too much about it.

EzyGuLaky
EzyGuLakyAuthorEzyGuLaky

You're my first reviewer, Thank you for rating my work. you made my day beautiful hahaha Well, I don't know if it's normal but the more I write the more my ideal old idea of the story change into something I like more. Wish that you still like my work in the future and tickle your interest more. Thank you again. Also, I don't understand this>>>[Insert obligatory grammar snark here.] please explain so that I will do it in the future.

EzyGuLaky
EzyGuLakyAuthorEzyGuLaky

Thank you very much, hope I could improve more

Xephotor:Its just something I put in my reviews to mention that grammar mistakes are present . I don’t like nitpicking grammar since the story is more valuable. Grammar improves as you read and write more so don’t worry too much about it.