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The_PaintrogrammerLv103yr
2021-07-23 06:42

Greetings to the author, in fact, the story is great, once you start the first chapter, you go through the remaining chapters without stopping, I love this type of story and this is the first novel that matches my considerations 100%, of course, it will be my favorite novel from now on the last word to the author, you did a really great job here!

THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST

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4.8
40 Chs

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Adwaid_Nambiar
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Author Here! If you are reading this, then I hope you have read or at least have started reading "THE 7TEEN", if you haven't, then do give it a try! I have tried some unconventional ways to write this story, where most of the story is told from the conversations characters have between them. This way my characters get to express themselves in their own words, making it their world more than mine. Initial chapters could have some errors here and there as I was still a beginner at the time but I can assure you that quality gets better with every chapter. Storywise, this can be one of the most suspenseful and dark thriller you may come across. And I have put my heart and soul into making this a perfect story. I hope whomsoever have or is going to read this gets engaged in the story "THE 7TEEN". And I want to ask, what do you think about DHRUV? ENJOY READING ;-)

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dinoriii
dinoriiiLv2

Overall : the story is amazing, the book is amazing, well just everything! The book itself was intriguing that it got me reading and reading! The book cover and synopsis was also attractive! Writing quality : It was good and there isnt much to criticise about it! There wasn’t any grammer mistakes. The author has his own way of writing which brings out the creativity and thrills to the story! Updating : It is constant and steady! definitely keeping up with the updates of the story! Characters : the characters were unique and interesting, they had their own personalities and backstorys to some. World background : it was good and it often changes between the past and present but it shows us My thoughts : i personally would recommend this book to anyone whos looking for the thrills and suspense! I really love the story and will keep updates of it! Keep up the good work and hope to see more of it!! ☺️☺️

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ilovesunshine
ilovesunshineLv1

Reveal spoiler

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RoseOfBlues
RoseOfBluesLv2

I feel like I watching an Indian action movie so I'm already on the edge of my seat. The title was written in a very creative way and I still can't wrap my mind around that (it was the main reason I clicked on the book in the first place [img=recommend]). The cover and synopsis are very catchy, creating the yearning to learn about the teenager. This book is realistic and makes me want to read it. I appreciate the effort taken into writing this great book. I wish to see when this book goes premium. Keep it up, Author!

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GANG9933
GANG9933Lv1

One OF THE CRAZIEST BOOK I EVER READ..!! THE WAY THE CHARACHTER'S ARE PLACED ITS SUPERB..!! LOVED THE WORK ALOT PERSONALLY MY FAVOURAITE CHARACHTER IS DHRUV THE ATTITUDE OF THAT KID IS KICK ASS..!!!!!

3yr
Rishabh_Bhandari_9564
Rishabh_Bhandari_9564Lv1

The way you expressed emotions without emoticons is really GREAT . I could actually feel the emotion . The choice of words makes the scenario very clear in your mind . You could actually see the characters . Hatts off to you adu ❣️

3yr
Mackaina
MackainaLv1

Unique story and the interesting plot was enough to keep me reading. I only wish some of the chapters weren't soo long, it was a bit hard to read.

3yr
Dee_author
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First, book cover is dope!💕 Then I must say, I always admire authors that write slice of life. Shii is hard! This novel has a captivating storyline, full of interesting twists and turns. MC is unique... special😆 Read to see what that means. While reading, it really does feel like you are watching a thriller movie, and I do love a good thriller movie. It's cool. Particularly, I love the way the author switches scenes between flashback and realtime. It's a great, not-so-easy-to-achieve writing technique and you are nailing it in your first book. That's awesome! It's a good read and hey, it's permanently in my library😉 Giving you a 5-star because I think you've got potential, author. Keep writing!

3yr
bee_333
bee_333Lv3

The character buildup is great, the plot is entertaining and the story overall is really interesting, the story is easy to follow . The author did a good one here...

3yr
Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11

Okay . . . . . . This is a book where, as you continue to read, will make you CAN'T STOP READING IT! This is quite a fresh story from all the reincarnation, & systems stuff here in WN. As you continue to read, questions such as all the kinds of WH questions keep popping in your mind. This book greatly hooks me. I won't spoil any beans but I greatly recommend this book. And I swear you won't get disappointed with it. Great work author!

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