Review Detail of ray_rose in Danmachi - Card Wizard
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Just read the first 13 chapters and am enjoying it so far! From whats happening so far im assuming the mc will be paired with ais(romantically and for adventurers) which i 100% support. Not sure if this will be a harem or just ais but im fine with either as long as its a small harem. His magic is really interesting and he could do a lot with it in the future. Author already said that they prefer the slow pacing and I agree….if he is op and levels up in a month then kinda ruins the story. Keep up the good work ill support
Danmachi - Card Wizard
Shireneko
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Does he at least interact and change stuff up or is he a simple side character with zero impact on the timeline? The synopsis is a giant red flag for me leading me to wonder who the mc really is with this written in it: The world will be slightly altered since I'll make changes here and there, tho only small changes as I'll leave all the troubles to Bell once he goes to Orario.
Shireneko:Thanks, I'll do my best :)
The story is incredible and your talent in creating this type of story is demonstrated, only when this bell does not make Aiden a secondary or filler character without any power to change the plot, put Aiden as the main one and that can change the story without the need for bell in the spotlight, secondary bell and Aiden protagonist, and about haren or just Ais I think it would be great if the danmachi girls interacted with Aiden in a flirty and romantic way (drama to the plot along with certain jealousy of Ais XD) but that in the end he has stayed with Ais
Shireneko:Thanks, I'll do my best :)
XSindryX:The story is incredible and your talent in creating this type of story is demonstrated, only when this bell does not make Aiden a secondary or filler character without any power to change the plot, put Aiden as the main one and that can change the story without the need for bell in the spotlight, secondary bell and Aiden protagonist, and about haren or just Ais I think it would be great if the danmachi girls interacted with Aiden in a flirty and romantic way (drama to the plot along with certain jealousy of Ais XD) but that in the end he has stayed with Ais
Bell ya tiene su anime y manga para quedarse con Ais, ahi que darle su protagonismo y chicas(Ais) al Aiden junto con pequeñas interacciones de mujeres con Aiden y celos de Ais para que sea un poco mas comico y agradable la trama
MaTachin:I prefer bell fall in love with aiz but got crushed by our mc lol
