Imaginative AU, love the characters and premise. Lots of potential with the card system and the idea of slower solid growth over fast rapid gains is very smart. Overall I was hooked after reading the first 10 chapters.

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9 years before canon, and what can i say for now this is masterpiece. Remember guys this is AU BUT this is exectued in a absolutely good way.... For now at least. I expect that the rest will be at least as good as first 13 chapters ! Thank you author.

The story is fantastic so far since this boyo here (me), has read up to chapter 22 and let me tell you. This story is an actual well-paced FF of danmachi. The mc got some heritage benefits from his mom n' pops which gives him so much potential to work with, either for writing or if you were in his shoes. The characters feel alive including Ais since its hard to write a expressionless character without making them into just cardboard cutouts. Hecc, even the mob characters still gets some reasonable lines to give us, the readers, and the Mc insight into how this world works! The training chapters don't feel out of place and is not some Info dump that you just gloss over. Since this is an AU the dungeon is alive and ever-growing with a confirmed 130+ floors(1000 years ago) from what the Mc parents told him. The novel has some nice references to other anime/manga that some of you old drivers may recognize ,but fear not newbies there was some brave souls who managed to point out exactly where they are from. But in all seriousness this work is seriously well done, with great writing either by characters or the grammar by the author, there is always room to improve no matter which aspect of the story you looking at. My only feedback is the Mc appearance description you could add in just a little more detail about his face and his clothes. But I wish health, luck and inspiration upon you author.

I really enjoyed the story and development of the MC with Ais, the only thing that makes me sad about this novel/fanfic is that we only have one chapter a day...we need more chapters a day... A LOT MORE CHAPTERS, aside from my little requirement lol best read I've had recently

Awesome liking the story so far good character interactions and developments 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Grammar wise it’s fine. Unfortunately the story just strikes me as fairly idk.. childish? It’s like it’s a shounen novel, but actually written by a 13 year old boy so it’s even more ridiculous. The plot developments feel extremely forced and almost nothing is left up to imagination or is put off until later. Basically everything is force-fed to you in an extremely barebones way, and the writing comes across as more of a summary than an actual story. The only ‘mystery’ that you can expect is about the same level as CN novels referring to everything with pronouns “Omg you dont think thats HIM do you?” “Yes it must be ’That man’ nobody else could be that strong” As for the card magic, honestly it seems like most of the time his abilities take precendence over the actual story. I think it’s likely the author decided to write a story with card magic, and chose Danmachi as the world instead of the other way around. That’s fine i guess but it just seems like some weirdly fetishized story cuz the author has a Twisted Fate kink. Overall it’s not that good, but it’s webnovel so what can you expect. If you like stories where you’re almost forced to turn your brain off and ingest copious amounts of Xanax to enjoy, then this might be the book for you

A very big disappointment because all the fun and the enjoyment i felt and expected to have to read the story simply vanish away in one single chapter, one of the firsts chapters that explains all the main character background, at first when he lost all his memories i imagined that we are going to explore them little by little as he go trough the dungeon and levels, and for my very big disappointment all thats fantasy was ruinef by using the gods power, and for your information, the god who established the guild, ouranos, prohibit the use of gods power without his permission, but thats not the main point, the main point is that you just throw out a holl character development, so many chapters, so many fields you could have explore just throw away to just demonstrate how awesome his origins are. I tried to love the story after that because i loved how it started but i couldn't, i have a couple more thinks i didnt much like about this same chapter but they are subjective (mc too op to a degree unimaginable, the strange relation with ais) so it doesn't count