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EIo_Police
EIo_PoliceLv153yr
2021-10-11 23:52

While the story setting seems unique and interesting, with hidden organisations and what not, that's about the only thing of interest. The characters are all, without exception, broken and so superficial that it gets annoying when they just interact. I still don't understand how the harem tag comes into play here, since the mc is probably one of the most unlikeable characters if seen so far. He couldn't even care for his mom, who somehow managed to pay the bills for them to not end up on the street. the annoying part about that is that this not caring about anyone and not having emotions for anyone is emphasised repeatedly for no reason at all. Interesting world building with (imo) terrible character design. Good luck

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Saltberg
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Its really rare to find good stuff in between the 95% of trash on this site, so im happy to proclaim this Novel a gem in the making. Sadly only 14 Chapters are out so far ... but hey, keep up the great work Author!

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IMightBeGod
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This story only gets more dark and more enjoyable the deeper you read, I cant help but toss back and forth waiting for more chapters for this story, pls dont drop it author and dont put it on haitus.

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haroonarfan109
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This novel .... the grammer and writing style... just *Muah* and 7 out of 5. Additionally, the story development and physiological insight on Protagonist's thinking have surpassed most of the Web novels here if not all. Even though the concept is somewhat clitche but it's totally understandable considering the colossal amount of effort it takes to think and weave a new idea in a story. However it always comes down to how the writer presents and ...oh boy... it definitely is one of the best. Especially so for the story development which is not forced to follow the clitche and give a very unique taste especially so considering that we have come here and have seen the 'tags'. THE TAGS, Very self explanatory indeed. Overall, a diamond in coal mine. A Koh-a-noor at that. Definitely recommend giving it a go but be sure to read to 'tags' beforehand considering some people tend to be less 'open' to these 'themes'.

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Really good novel so far. Keep up the good work dude . . . . . Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

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theyasuke_
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I feel like would have enjoyed it more if it was written like a normal Novel and not something from the 80's, why exactly are you trying to complicate simple sentences with huge grammars, it's so off putting and annoying, couldn't focus at all.

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One of the more darker novel Ive read but I absolutely love the characters in this. I cant wait to see its developments!

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Archonn
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one of the best web novel can offer. a little bit slowpaced but necessary for character development. I'll be sticking for that juicy ****** .

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After looking back at the novel I feel thrilled about this experience. The writing is top-notch, at least to my taste and I loved how the scenes were depicted, although I was shocked by some of them. I am looking forward to its further development. The main character does what he considers right and the "system" doesn't affect his own thinking or ensnaring him like a snake (at least for now). I couldn't take my eyes off it. Of course, I didn't expect a family-friendly story, but this was incredible. I found one or two words that were mistaken for something else, but all in all, it's awesome and also rich in vocabulary. Keep up with the story and absolutely don't drop this gem, author.

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