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It is a very generic novel, the author at least in the first phase did not bother to explain things, he was simply writing superficially and quickly, in my opinion there was a lack of writing with more details and explanations, as it took only 2 chapters and the MC he goes from an ordinary human who planned the death of his parents and committed suicide (he was aware of his luck, money and escape were possible) to a great powerful magician. I reading, but it is more out of false hope that the author leaves aside worn clichés and a little attention to detail and originality.

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Luck is a Charm

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Idczhen
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I understand your reasoning and agreed that the first 2 chapter is indeed rough. I have already re-edit my first two chapters completely so hopefully you give me another chance of redemption. The word count for the first chapter have become 1.7k while my second chapter is 1.9k. I'm not sure if the webnovel app would update my chapter but it should be updated in the desktop.