Review Detail of Jonas_3299 in In Harry Potter with OTS System

I'm dropping this story due to my character, let me explain. generally speaking I dislike MCs (or ppl in general) that devalue themselves."I'm an idiot" etc are examples for this. let me give you a piece of life advice. If a person is bullied, ask yourself: what makes them the bullied person instead of someone else? What are people's intention when they act in certain ways? The answers usually come with experience in life yet one has to start asking the correct questions in order to keep bettering themselves. Life often is hardship and only by acknowleding that you are doing something wrong you can better yourself. The missing depth of Character shows that you don't yet know about the coherency in human behavior. An example I'd give you is that the MC "works hard" to improve themselves, yet doesnt have enough self-respect and toughness to be a person that's willing to through the process of doing things they don't like doing.(discipline). He is like a feather in the wind with no goals aside from "better stats in magic" and just keeps floating wherever the wind may take him. Humans like that tend to be lazy (if they can) and stop moving forward in face of hardships. Therefore they'd stop bettering themselves at an acceptable level. This is just a generalization but I hope you get the point and keep improving.