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In Harry Potter with OTS System

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Read In Harry Potter with OTS System fanfiction written by the author dvelasquez on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Book&Literature fanfic stories, covering romance, action, adventure, reincarnation, magic. βœ“ Newest updated βœ“ All rights reserved

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What would happen to a guy that died out of rage while in a Guild War? What would the choice of some bored dimensional being who catches his soul in the middle of his way to the afterlife? What would happen when the guy's addiction mixes with the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!? What chaos would that bring to the world!? ------------------------------------ Well, this was an idea I had like a week ago, and wanted to try it out on my journey to learn how to write. So, here it is. It's another fanfic, yes. Because it's easier to write. Also, with this one, I'll probably post only during the weekends, not daily like with the Novel's Extra's Extra. Firstly because I want to finish the other one, and also because I need to research a lot more (I'm not that knowledgeable in Harry Potter.) As usual, any feedback and criticism will be well received, and thanks for reading! Will be posting this in Royal Road and Scribble Hub too.

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oceansage
oceansageLv4oceansage

If the author update this constantly then this story would be one of the best hp fanfics of all time. There are only 4 chapters at this point but the story has amazing potential. As writing quality, narration, mc's personality are excellent. I'm just hope that author doesn't drop this too soon. Ps. Good work author.

Leona_Tremaine
Leona_TremaineLv3Leona_Tremaine

Bored out of your mind and just strolling rankings or the Recently Updated section? STOP what you're doing and go read this fanfic!! Long chapters? Check System? Check Mc transmigrated with knowledge of the plot and isn't stupid? Check Will he follow canon? We're not there yet but sure hope not OP? Check We aren't at the plot so I can't say anything about how the mc will affect the story, but the start is interesting and it caught my attention.

Diosazura599
Diosazura599Lv2Diosazura599

Interesante [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

SORCERERSUPREME_7
SORCERERSUPREME_7Lv2SORCERERSUPREME_7

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

Dio99
Dio99Lv4Dio99

I'm soo upset I found this fanfic too early. If only I found it two months later.Now Imma have to wait for chapters to come out.😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩

Potofhoney
PotofhoneyLv4Potofhoney

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

msyaifulloh2111
msyaifulloh2111Lv2msyaifulloh2111

Apakah penulis akan melanjutkan ceritanya? Entahlah, aku baru-baru ini membaca banyak fanfic yang sangat bagus dan sebagian besar ceritanya dijatuhkan. Dan aku harus mengulang permintaan yang sama di setiap komentar, semoga penulis akan melanjutkan ceritanya, cerita ini luar biasa!

Joel_T
Joel_TLv2Joel_T

I always love it when an other system of magic is used alongside the HP universe's magic. We haven't had an update in almost 2 weeks as of now and I hope we get one soon. I wonder what anyone's reaction would be to you summoning something like a thunder giant πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

SolomonMumuDoom
SolomonMumuDoomLv3SolomonMumuDoom

Very goodβ””|∡|┐β™ͺβ™ͺβ”Œ|∡|β”˜β™ͺ β™ͺβ”Œ|∡|β”˜β™ͺ β™ͺβ”Œ|∡|β”˜β™ͺ (ο½’`ο½₯Ο‰ο½₯)ο½’Ζͺ(˘⌣˘)ΚƒγƒΎ( ͝° ΝœΚ–Ν‘Β°)γƒŽβ™ͺ(γƒŽ^_^)γƒŽβ‚β‚β—ž( β€’ΰ―°β€’ )β—Ÿβ‚Žβ‚Žβ”Œ(・。・)β”˜β™ͺβ™ͺ~(´Ρ` )(οΌΎ3οΌΎβ™ͺ(οΌΎ3οΌΎβ™ͺβ”Œ(・。・)β”˜β™ͺβ”Œ(・。・)β”˜β™ͺ(οΌΎ3οΌΎβ™ͺ⁽⁽◝( β€’ΰ―°β€’ )β—œβΎβΎ(οΌΎ3οΌΎβ™ͺβ”Œ(・。・)β”˜β™ͺ₍₍ ◝(γ€€οΎŸβˆ€ ゚ )β—Ÿ βΎβΎγƒ˜(οΏ£Ο‰οΏ£γƒ˜)(γƒŽ^_^)γƒŽΖͺ(˘⌣˘)ΚƒΖͺ(˘⌣˘)Κƒ

josuamarques
josuamarquesLv3josuamarques

W. Q.: The most lacking part of the novel so far. It has a lot of grammatical errors and makes reading quite difficult at times. Not the worst, as a single edit could fix most of it, but yeah. S. o. U.: Almost daily apart from when the Author has his own issues. S. D.: Progressing nicely along. Still in the first year of Hogwarts but there's a lot more to explore. C. D.: The character so far is very likeable. He has brains and makes use of any exploit he can find. W. B.: What can I say, I love HP Keep up the good work.

Tupan
TupanLv3Tupan

Great story so far. The author is a great writer with a really unusual and new system that i was not familiar with but is interesting. The descriptions of magic and the system are precise and fun to read. I hope you develop more the main character relationships.

Supremo_Ellimac
Supremo_EllimacLv4Supremo_Ellimac

I just wanted to say that this is the 2nd best HP fan fic that I've ever read. No offense lol. The first for me is, well it is in spanish so Im had a hard time reading it. But the story is...Sasuke in HP world. I forgot the title because it is also in Spanish. So let's go back to your story. It is good and unlike most of the HP fan fic this fanfic happens 2 years before the canon. The character development is great. And I only have 1 wish or request if you ever decided who to include or who to choose as a love interest please take Hermione!!!! Thou I hate harem but if Hermione is included I can handle it. I really just don't want her to end up with Ron! For godsake! So please take Hermione 😭😭😭 even as a concubine.

pasito_tun_tun
pasito_tun_tunLv4pasito_tun_tun

Boring, the same story and the same dialogues. Mc is boring. Crying bitch with a "xianxian tragic" past.............................................................................................................

Lucifer_morning
Lucifer_morningLv3Lucifer_morning

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random_ar_hap
random_ar_hapLv2random_ar_hap

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omarmeftah
omarmeftahLv5omarmeftah

i hate that i found this book so soon. it may have some bad parts but the majority of the book is great. good job mister author and i hope you increase your updates

Daoist2OSGqC
Daoist2OSGqCLv3Daoist2OSGqC

I have a question author? Is the time line before or after harry himself went to hogwarts. πŸ€” Just curious as all and sometimes confusedπŸ˜… Hope you get this Yours truly- One of your fans

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

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FadeKnight
FadeKnightLv2FadeKnight

Updates are fast. Writing is readable. Character's are likeable.The world so far is a good AU. A fantastic story.

gamer9
gamer9Lv5gamer9

Good story using old school MMO Tibia magic. Still have no idea what OTS means Google isn't much help. xiiiwgwh see kwha invdobqudvwjgxuwn q

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