In Harry Potter with OTS System
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In Harry Potter with OTS System


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Read In Harry Potter with OTS System fanfiction written by the author dvelasquez on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Book&Literature fanfic stories, covering romance, action, adventure, reincarnation, magic. βœ“ Newest updated βœ“ All rights reserved


What would happen to a guy that died out of rage while in a Guild War? What would the choice of some bored dimensional being who catches his soul in the middle of his way to the afterlife? What would happen when the guy's addiction mixes with the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!? What chaos would that bring to the world!? ------------------------------------ Well, this was an idea I had like a week ago, and wanted to try it out on my journey to learn how to write. So, here it is. It's another fanfic, yes. Because it's easier to write. Also, with this one, I'll probably post only during the weekends, not daily like with the Novel's Extra's Extra. Firstly because I want to finish the other one, and also because I need to research a lot more (I'm not that knowledgeable in Harry Potter.) As usual, any feedback and criticism will be well received, and thanks for reading! Will be posting this in Royal Road and Scribble Hub too.

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If the author update this constantly then this story would be one of the best hp fanfics of all time. There are only 4 chapters at this point but the story has amazing potential. As writing quality, narration, mc's personality are excellent. I'm just hope that author doesn't drop this too soon. Ps. Good work author.


Bored out of your mind and just strolling rankings or the Recently Updated section? STOP what you're doing and go read this fanfic!! Long chapters? Check System? Check Mc transmigrated with knowledge of the plot and isn't stupid? Check Will he follow canon? We're not there yet but sure hope not OP? Check We aren't at the plot so I can't say anything about how the mc will affect the story, but the start is interesting and it caught my attention.


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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..


I'm soo upset I found this fanfic too early. If only I found it two months later.Now Imma have to wait for chapters to come out.😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩


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Apakah penulis akan melanjutkan ceritanya? Entahlah, aku baru-baru ini membaca banyak fanfic yang sangat bagus dan sebagian besar ceritanya dijatuhkan. Dan aku harus mengulang permintaan yang sama di setiap komentar, semoga penulis akan melanjutkan ceritanya, cerita ini luar biasa!


I always love it when an other system of magic is used alongside the HP universe's magic. We haven't had an update in almost 2 weeks as of now and I hope we get one soon. I wonder what anyone's reaction would be to you summoning something like a thunder giant πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚


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W. Q.: The most lacking part of the novel so far. It has a lot of grammatical errors and makes reading quite difficult at times. Not the worst, as a single edit could fix most of it, but yeah. S. o. U.: Almost daily apart from when the Author has his own issues. S. D.: Progressing nicely along. Still in the first year of Hogwarts but there's a lot more to explore. C. D.: The character so far is very likeable. He has brains and makes use of any exploit he can find. W. B.: What can I say, I love HP Keep up the good work.


Great story so far. The author is a great writer with a really unusual and new system that i was not familiar with but is interesting. The descriptions of magic and the system are precise and fun to read. I hope you develop more the main character relationships.


I just wanted to say that this is the 2nd best HP fan fic that I've ever read. No offense lol. The first for me is, well it is in spanish so Im had a hard time reading it. But the story is...Sasuke in HP world. I forgot the title because it is also in Spanish. So let's go back to your story. It is good and unlike most of the HP fan fic this fanfic happens 2 years before the canon. The character development is great. And I only have 1 wish or request if you ever decided who to include or who to choose as a love interest please take Hermione!!!! Thou I hate harem but if Hermione is included I can handle it. I really just don't want her to end up with Ron! For godsake! So please take Hermione 😭😭😭 even as a concubine.


Boring, the same story and the same dialogues. Mc is boring. Crying bitch with a "xianxian tragic" past.............................................................................................................


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i hate that i found this book so soon. it may have some bad parts but the majority of the book is great. good job mister author and i hope you increase your updates


I have a question author? Is the time line before or after harry himself went to hogwarts. πŸ€” Just curious as all and sometimes confusedπŸ˜… Hope you get this Yours truly- One of your fans




Updates are fast. Writing is readable. Character's are likeable.The world so far is a good AU. A fantastic story.


Good story using old school MMO Tibia magic. Still have no idea what OTS means Google isn't much help. xiiiwgwh see kwha invdobqudvwjgxuwn q


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