Item: In Harry Potter with OTS System
Rating: 5
Author: Juwon_Oh

Juwon_OhLv43yr

2021-03-07 13:10

I don't typically review a story till a fanfic reaches around 30 chapters, however this one changed my mine. Despite all the childish and poorly written fanfics out there that gets five stars when its really nothing but a pile of garbage, this one is not it. The author actually puts thought and consequences to actions. While the mc is strong he is not op. There are drawbacks to the powers and has a lot of potential. My only hope is that the author expands further into the world of Harry Potter past the school years. Most rarely ever explore the world.

In Harry Potter with OTS System

dvelasquez

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72 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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dvelasquezAuthor

Thanks for reading, man! And just as I've been doing with my other fanfic, I too plan to travel through this world and meet other places, not just the typical Hogwarts and London, thanks for the review! I'm glad you've liked it!

3yr

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