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2021-05-18 00:43

I’ve read 64 chapters. The story has potential but it’s a bit messy right now. There’s way too much happening at once. MC has already won a dance competition, joined a design contest, and is about to participate in a math olympiad. On top of all that she started an entertainment company with her half brother and wrote a screenplay which they are currently making into a drama. And she wants to start a design company with her mom. It’s just too much, too fast. What I like so far is her interaction with her adoptive parents. And also the dynamic between her and the ML. It’s really cute everytime they have a scene together. Like I said it has potential so I’ll continue reading and hope it slows down a bit (activities-wise).

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