The story line is excellent and the character development is outstanding. with that being said, I dislike how the author keeps repeating the same description of said characters over and over and over... EVERY CHAPTER! I get that this is a money draw and we have to pay to read, but clearly we only have a few sentences to read because its just a drawn out description of what they look like or what they're eating. it takes away from the story and lowers the quality of the novel. The author is obviously talented, so why kill it with repetitive boring details? How many times do we have to read about her cap or her long legs wrapped in jeans or a white tee shirt??? This is why I could only give 3 stars for quality and development.
Brother Ling
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