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Review Detail of MyShell in Madam’s Identities Shocks the Entire City Again

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MyShell
MyShellLv131yrMyShell

The story line is excellent and the character development is outstanding. with that being said, I dislike how the author keeps repeating the same description of said characters over and over and over... EVERY CHAPTER! I get that this is a money draw and we have to pay to read, but clearly we only have a few sentences to read because its just a drawn out description of what they look like or what they're eating. it takes away from the story and lowers the quality of the novel. The author is obviously talented, so why kill it with repetitive boring details? How many times do we have to read about her cap or her long legs wrapped in jeans or a white tee shirt??? This is why I could only give 3 stars for quality and development.

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Madam’s Identities Shocks the Entire City Again

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ReishiEucalyptus
ReishiEucalyptusLv14ReishiEucalyptus

Frankly, (not having started the book yet) I think this is an unfortunate pattern in many Chinese webnovels😂

ReishiEucalyptus
ReishiEucalyptusLv14ReishiEucalyptus

I take it back, this one is way more excessive than most

Baguio_Gal_9178
Baguio_Gal_9178Lv15Baguio_Gal_9178

Agreed! I also find it annoying & takes away from the story. Too much fluff & not enough substance. 🤔