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FeatherInHat
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2021-09-18 13:25

Beginning of this story is a jumbled mess that made me stop reading. The premise of people being isekai-ed to a world with a videogame system to gain experience and level up is good. The Mc wakes up in the body of a child and is immediately running with his close friend away from monsters but the pair fall down a cliff to a dungeon. Then the mc completely ignores his friend to hunt dungeon mobs with a broken arm and no splint, medical or magical treatment. Finds out just him and not his friend was moved by a group of noble brats from different countries into a safe spot in the dungeon. The noble party had a healer that didnt bother to heal him when he was unconscious and possibly dieing but did heal him when they ran into him grinding mobs when the party returned from also grinding mobs. Instead of finding his friend he follows the strangers to the dungeon boss room where he is 'betrayed'. Then he is saved by plot armor because surprise the dungeon boss is actually some mysterious trainer and trains the mc for months, during which he completely ignores what could have happened to the friend he tried to keep safe when he came to this world. note: while i am dropping this because the early chapters were hard to get through, maybe the later chapters get better and the story improves and some folks may enjoy this for later plot development.

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Krystknt
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the "lack" of proper synopsis is really not good. Your review helps... thanks for some plot details..

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Andrew_Arthur
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like is that even a synopsis

Krystknt:the "lack" of proper synopsis is really not good. Your review helps... thanks for some plot details..
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