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MagneBP666
MagneBP666Lv24yr
2021-01-22 03:13

Alright so after having read 2 chapters I feel like I have something to say. First off: - There are some minor grammar mistakes but nothing too disturbing, reading it out loud in front of yourself or getting a friend to read it through might help. But as I said, nothing too disturbing. Secondly: - I like how it starts off with her being captured, but it feels kinda to easy for her to escape like that? I don't know if that was on purpose but that's just my thoughts. And lastly: I like how the mystery about the court adviser gets introduced in the first few chapters, and the king is not a dumb.

Princess Not in Distress

Bloom759
4.9
203 Chs

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Bloom759
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Thanks for the review, I'd incorporate that

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Oh this novel is fantastic! Although I have only finished chapter 4, I couldn't wait to review it. The female protagonist is really badass; she is smart, a good fighter and also a good actress with strong momentum (which is really my cup of coffee). Her first time meeting the ML (I think he is) ended up with 1-0 in her favor. And I have to say her actions are like that of a villainess. *thumbs up* I really like the kick off of this novel, and am excited to read it further. Great job & Ganbatte! ʕ·ᴥ·ʔ

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THIS BOOK MUST WIN, I appreciate how strong the FEMALE LEAD is. The Role is completely reversed here in this story. The mixture of fantasy with Romance is excellent.

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Hats off to Princess.... you are literally wow..... I just love you.... author thanks a lot to create Princess Aria....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Really interesting story.❤❤❤ The strong female lead, excellent storyline, interesting characters, an amazing writing style...this book has everything that needs to read. I love the very unique and new idea were princess is not dependent. I am instantly hooked to your book dear author❤❤. It is an amazing collection. I recommend it to everyone it is must-read.

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