Review Detail of Aevitas in Tale of MAKKON

Writing Quality: 3/5 The grammar was not great. I am guessing English is not the author's first language. The spelling did not have any errors at least, and the grammar was at least readable even if it wasn't very good. Stability of Updates: 4/5 Decent update rate, but not very consistent with updates. Story Development: 3/5 The story is very basic with one of the main characters being isekai'ed, and the main heroine being rescued by the love interest. It was a bit weird having the man and horse randomly have a feeling of danger for Valin out of nowhere despite having never met, but that might be explained later and I have not read past the first chapter. Character Design: 3/5 There really isn't much description of the characters, so I am not able to get a great feel on what they look like. I can however get a feel of the characters personalities from their actions which is good. World Background: 3/5 I can't really get a good feel of the background other than It seems to have a medieval type world. Overall most of the issues I have with the story stem from the lack of practice with English, but the story seems interesting. The only solution to getting better at a language is practice, if you improve then this story could become really good. One of my favorite novels (Rise of The Undead Legion) had a start that is 10x worse than this, but quickly became extremely enjoyable as they got better at English.