Review Detail of Garessta in Tale of MAKKON

I recommend you ProWritingAid for whatever grammar and style errors there are in your text (and they exist, sadly, as well as typos). Moving on. The premise of time travel... Well, the setting is definitely not an overused one, bonus points for that! The Makkon and his people, though, are surpriiisingly gentlemany for superstitious medieval warriors. And none of them thought that she was a witch/fairy/spirit! Also, details. 1000 miles? That's a lot. Even on horses you will need weeks to cover this distance. Recommendation: if you don't know something, like an amount of miles a rider can cover in a day of travel, just google. These small details may not seem important, but they are a fundament that hold the house called "immersion". 1700 year... Honestly, the book gives off an impression that everything happens much earlier, somewhere in Dark Ages or so. But I am not very familiar with details of the period. But 1700 is past Renaissance! I also wonder why a girl from America is called Valin de Aver. And why Makkon believed her story so easily. He didn't even ask for some proof or anything. I wonder if this going to be more of an adventure of a slice of life story... I see it has potential, but requires a lot of work as well.