Review Detail of lingchenxi in Tale of MAKKON

The style is great, the storyline is amazing and I love how the story progresses. However, for this to be a honest review, I have to be completely honest. My suggestion to the writer is that there's a few grammatical errors, but don't be discouraged! You're doing a great job here! If you would like to share, do discord me. cheers and have a great day!