Review Detail of darkimortal in One Step at a Time.
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This story had good potential. But that was before the author got lazy and wanted to follow canon. This first world was supposedly an AU but somehow canon went off without a hitch, just tiny minor changes that overall somehow did nothing to change the original events. Overall this story has not had many original ideas to make this story the author's own. It feels like I'm reading a downgraded version of HSDK. It's sad the author made the person who sent the MC on this adventure Chaos, but I've literally seen absolutely no chaos in this story. ( Chaos to me would be the Butterfly Affect ) This story just seems like some kind of silly halfhearted fix-it fic. I would have liked a big neon sign telling me that so I could just not read this.
One Step at a Time.
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