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2021-04-20 06:57

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Multiverse transmigrator

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4.0
35 Chs

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Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12

I had made a comment expressing how good this novel was, but with the last chapters I realize that the author by wanting to be "original" in his plot (showing that the ROB was actually a demon who deceived him, that the MC was raped by his butler, that the demon Lilith fell in love with the mc for a silly reason, etc) I think he is going in a bad direction, however it is the author's story, so good luck with your novel, but I'm out

4yr

BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13

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Dragon_5081
Dragon_5081Lv3

Story development: Plot is really messy feels really rushed I don't feel enough time being put into the character relationship development it should've took more time. Also pretty much skipped that part for solo leveling. Character design: The character's are a shell of their former selves the mc is probably the only one that is kind of fleshed out World background:Pretty much nothing made the ATG and Solo leveling worlds feel so small. Not based on these worlds at all mostly just the characters could've just thrown them all into an alternate world and make it a giant mess and I feel like it would achieve the same result.

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Sommerscave
SommerscaveLv14

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Sepbenz
SepbenzLv4

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Yue_021
Yue_021Lv14

Well... I decided to read this without bothering to read the reviews after seeing ATG and Solo leveling... and I have to say I was truly an idiot. I wasted so much time in this on **** fanfic. I only read this becuase I saw that the world included atg and solo leveling. At first I truly enjoyed it.... but the author decided to f*** up the story and thought it was nice to make all the time he spent in those two world as nothing but a dream. This was major turnoff that made me decide to drop this. I honestly enjoyed and loved the atg arc, only to realize that it was all fake. I truly believe that this would have been better if the author decided to stick to his original plan take it from there.

3yr
GeneralAldrnari
GeneralAldrnariLv5

At this point, his way more worse than yunche. To all degenrates out there hating Yunche, you should hate this guy also. And all this planning and how he thinks that his playing "chess" on a chess board without enemies made me see how the Author really is still new on writing. His 'plan' i dont even know if it can be called that but its all 99% Canon 1% his delusion. Previous dialouge of qingyue and lingxi was garbage as crap, Characters bland as washboard with the mindset of "Mysterious" bias on how a stranger are with their midst. To be honest, all i see is a kid, a child whos attitude is not worth to have that power if were basing for someone who's worthy in ranking worth reincarnating, this guy is much worser than yunche so hell wont be enough. I dont know what kind of shiet the author made, or if even he know what the hell his writing, contradictions after contradictions on how he keeps saying who he should not be, but the author said fahck it and made hi worse than a Crappy chinese Mc. Really pathetic writing. I dont even know how this shiet last long and still updating. Well lets see if theres progress down the line. Writing quality wise - Is readable but lacks information on small things like not explaining if its Night just skips straight to " After eating he sleeps" should be "After eating he went straight to his room. Its already late in the evening so he went to rest" Ever miner tidbit information helps bring color to the world your are describing. Story Development - Still at Chapter 7, like what i said above his worse than yunche and can be a labeled as your typical chinese young master with the knowledge of a modern day useless rich boy. You can already see how trash and pathetic his personality and how contradicting he is. I dont if theres progress but if theres not, then this story is crap.

4yr
Ruben_Lopez_1453
Ruben_Lopez_1453Lv1

not trying to be a dick or something but the reason I started to read novels was to get away from the preachiness of modern entertainment, I liked the Idea a the beginning and I think is commendable to go for an out of the common background for your MC but it started to feel like I was been preached at, it may be a misconception but this is how it felt for me. It's cool that you thought of going by the trauma route however I think most people get into fanfics because of the self-inserts or the catharsis that a power fantasy provides them, I wish you luck in your FF however it is not for me.

4yr
Craze_Novel
Craze_NovelLv11

Ahh It's frustrating. First few chapter​s was so good but after ATG arc it becomes shit I couldn't read it anymore the way MC think was so mess up manipulative my ass it's down right mind control and lying MC nothing more than a scum read at your own risk

4yr
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