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2021-01-18 21:25

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At this point, his way more worse than yunche. To all degenrates out there hating Yunche, you should hate this guy also. And all this planning and how he thinks that his playing "chess" on a chess board without enemies made me see how the Author really is still new on writing. His 'plan' i dont even know if it can be called that but its all 99% Canon 1% his delusion. Previous dialouge of qingyue and lingxi was garbage as crap, Characters bland as washboard with the mindset of "Mysterious" bias on how a stranger are with their midst. To be honest, all i see is a kid, a child whos attitude is not worth to have that power if were basing for someone who's worthy in ranking worth reincarnating, this guy is much worser than yunche so hell wont be enough. I dont know what kind of shiet the author made, or if even he know what the hell his writing, contradictions after contradictions on how he keeps saying who he should not be, but the author said fahck it and made hi worse than a Crappy chinese Mc. Really pathetic writing. I dont even know how this shiet last long and still updating. Well lets see if theres progress down the line. Writing quality wise - Is readable but lacks information on small things like not explaining if its Night just skips straight to " After eating he sleeps" should be "After eating he went straight to his room. Its already late in the evening so he went to rest" Ever miner tidbit information helps bring color to the world your are describing. Story Development - Still at Chapter 7, like what i said above his worse than yunche and can be a labeled as your typical chinese young master with the knowledge of a modern day useless rich boy. You can already see how trash and pathetic his personality and how contradicting he is. I dont if theres progress but if theres not, then this story is crap.

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