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Review Detail of TBS_23 in This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder

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TBS_23
TBS_23Lv132yrTBS_23

Story started out great... But it keeps on going downhill... The first problem started when almost all villians always escape even when the MC is equiped with very powerful talismans and artifacts... Even the mother one of the top immortals who is very overprotective ignores the escapees after she finds out... The second problem was the Lovespot arc... Even the way the sect dealt with the problem by helping their bottom level immortal and his wasteful grandson is stupid... Since most of the immortals and the sect master are not their family... Makes it very stupid decision and from the top sect... Makes you wonder how they remained the top sect if they make low level entry mistakes like this... Third problem is Tianyi's trauma which doesn't make sense... For him to be scared of all Nascent Soul Cultivators after he was almost killed by a reincarnated and regressor cultivator with memories and techniques of many cultivators doesn't make sense... The trauma could have been of the dragon emperor, regressors or reincarnators or atleast soul cultivators... Him being afraid of Nascent Soul Cultivators after almost being killed by an abnormal does not make sense... Last and the newest is the recent problem... All of a sudden Yushan who has been a role model senior brother and a good sect cultivator at heart is obsessed with Daoyi... He is so focused on her that he is souring relationships with everybody... For a person who valued relationships this came out of left field... The major problem with all these is that they are main points with affect the plot and they are dragging the novel down... Makes it seem like the author forgets about most things he writes therefore ends up contradicting himself...

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This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder

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iYT
iYTLv13iYT

I wish I read this before i started reading then skimming through this waste of time.

SkySlasher
SkySlasherLv14SkySlasher

This was well said, No [ Novel Like Protagonist ], gets a proper ending ikr the MC is not Murdering HoBo but all of them miraculously gets saved and powers up, ik the heavenly dao is openly protecting them but not Once MC thought of this and try torment Heavenly Dao by killing this [ Protagonist ]s when Heavenly Dao is tormenting him never endingly

TBS_23
TBS_23Lv13TBS_23

Yeah... Lifesaving treasures are so common in this world its crazy...

SkySlasher:This was well said, No [ Novel Like Protagonist ], gets a proper ending ikr the MC is not Murdering HoBo but all of them miraculously gets saved and powers up, ik the heavenly dao is openly protecting them but not Once MC thought of this and try torment Heavenly Dao by killing this [ Protagonist ]s when Heavenly Dao is tormenting him never endingly