iYT
A highly motivated couch potato that enjoys complaining about the redundancy and overbearing info drops that plague web novels. For Christ's sake get to the point!
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iYT7mthCommentedI really like the premise you're working with here, but you really need to get out of the habit of falling back on lazy writing. 'That' losses any effectiveness if you keep using it. If it's so secretive that it can't be named, you certainly aren't having a lengthy discussion in which you continuously reference that unnamed 'that'. couple chapters late, but oh well
Ch 2441 True Geniuses! I- iYT2yrCommented
how far is not far? if the battle is so easy for elorin why hasn't he done anything to stop this interrogation in the middle of the battlefield? is this one of those terrible web-novel tropes of let a few known characters die so we can be shown how powerful elorin is?
Ch 561 Familiar Face - iYT2yrReplied to Thomas_Tredwell
well, i did say or so. i kid. you're right i shouldn't have used why, "the in's & out's of his self-created ranking system." there that's better, no? 1. he has no idea what his ability is right now & if remember correctly it is not fully awakened yet. it's just a feeling he has right now. 2. he doesn't have all the input values yet to even attempt to start ranking, as we find out here, & yet he rigidly sticks to these rankings when creating a plan of attack.
In that instant, the Priest's strength stat rose to… 0.97! - iYT2yrReplied to rafagashyh
lol, is it really a spoiler though? Well i guess I got another spoiler for you...salt is a preservative. So, congratulations you are now less ignorant than before you meet me! You're welcome
In that instant, the Priest's strength stat rose to… 0.97! - iYT2yrReplied to Axes
no shit
He had only barely gotten in and begun scrubbing himself when his fatigue hit him like a speeding vehicle. Even he wasn't sure when, but his consciousness slipped into a deep darkness. - iYT2yrCommented
Can we get bullet points on the loot? This is becoming ridiculous. Loot descriptions are taking up way too much of each chapter now.
[Resplendent Lesser Primordial Heart] :: A unique culmination of the essence of a Lesser Primordial Beast. It has undergone changes as its absorption allows one to choose the rapid proliferation of normal Galaxies or the change of Normal Galaxies into Dao Galaxies, with enough essence existing to birth 800 Splendiferous Universes. Other uses of the Primordial Heart have become available after the change in their nature as a heart can now be utilized to allow for a Dao Induction, where one fourth of the essence of a Resplendent Lesser Primordial Heart is enough to allow one to gain initial comprehension in any Lesser, Grand, or Cosmic Dao they come across the essence of. Half of the essence of a single Heart can also grant one complete comprehension, with the other half allowing them complete Assimilation in any Dao. Current Resplendent Lesser Primordial Hearts- 10. - iYT2yrReplied to Thomas_Tredwell
Didn't need you to explain why he created his ranking system, and using the meter lends no credence to your argument. Any measurement should be able to be validated by outside sources, the mc's cannot be & on several occasions is invalidated in the next couple of lines. It is also completely abandoned within 50 or so chapters.
In that instant, the Priest's strength stat rose to… 0.97! - iYT2yrReplied to AGuyWhoReadsStuff
Well, to be honest I read 2 whole chapters of this shitshow. This paragraph was just the first major clue as to what would follow. Imagine buying a luxury vehicle and then spending money to make it bomb proof, but then getting killed buy some idiot with a .22 cause you didn't say you also wanted it bulletproof. Think that shit would actually happen? If you do your and idiot, so mentioning both is pointless A road maintained for his use, or something to this effect, implies this is a private road for his personal use. This is stupid and cities will not maintain this for you. Everything is about word count for this asshat, why else would he write out the MC's full name every fucking time? Have we been introduced to any other character named Compass? Anywho, continue reading stuff. I'm sure those squiggly lines will start to make sense to you one day.
Leaving the studio, Compass Carburettor boarded his bullet and bomb-proof car and headed towards the airport, entering a route maintained exclusively for him. He then boarded his private jet, watching it take off from the window. - iYT2yrReplied to TBS_23
- iYT2yrCommented
This paragraph leads me to believe that this story is a poor attempt a trolling, or the author is an idiot who thinks they infinitely times more cleaver then they really are. All filler no coherent story is all you should expect.
Leaving the studio, Compass Carburettor boarded his bullet and bomb-proof car and headed towards the airport, entering a route maintained exclusively for him. He then boarded his private jet, watching it take off from the window. - iYT2yrCommented
let's hope there is no prolonged gun fights that require more than 6 bullets in an hour, cause you're fucked if you do
He then boasted with a smile, "The nozzle can suck in the air and filter in only the carbon and carbon-based products. And, it processes them internally to create bullets. Everything is automatic. It takes an hour to create a bullet. They are rectangular in shape with a sharp edge, and a minute after it is launched, the bullet sublimates into air, leaving behind no traces. The magazine holds six bullets." - iYT2yrReplied to iYT
So, i stuck with it. The first 70-90 chapters were challenging, to say the least, but the author is talented enough to deliver just enough good to keep you around. Leo's decision making no longer has you pulling hair out as much, since he finally develops skills that would have kept him alive when it was only the author doing so. Being tamed by the mink was enough to throw coins out for 2 more chapters.
- iYT2yrCommented
and this is the 4th time the mc should have died. hopefully, we later find out that his power is a save point & he dies multiple times every fight before achieving victory.
He had only barely gotten in and begun scrubbing himself when his fatigue hit him like a speeding vehicle. Even he wasn't sure when, but his consciousness slipped into a deep darkness. - iYT2yrCommented
you mean like his self created ranking system did
One thing that was clear to him about these treasures is that none of them were perfect. He most certainly couldn't expect a Black grade treasure to be so. If he found such a 'helpful' treasure, it might lead him down the wrong path. And, even if it was correct, it might limit him by boxing in his thinking. - iYT2yrCommented
these numerical values have no meaning, pure speculation on the mc's end. especially, since he gets these numbers from a quick glance. since he bases his plan of attack on these assigned values the Mc should already be dead.
In that instant, the Priest's strength stat rose to… 0.97! - iYT2yrReplied to Lorthos
or the fact that a duke's grandson is about to go marching around the countryside making friends and boasting about his looks with a slave collar on. cause no one would take advantage of this, nor will it be viewed as embarrassing or shameful. probably won't even get mentioned until its convenient again
"Thank you, Master," William replied. "What kind of souvenir do you want?" - iYT2yrCommented
are the girls in this world commonly attracted to 10 year olds with slave collars?
"Feel free to pick up a girl to bring home as a wife when you return," James shouted. "It doesn't matter how many you bring back. We'll take them all!"