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2022-07-06 14:57

honestly couldn't tell if I even liked the story as they were only three short chapters available to read and chapters 4 through 25 are paywalled by Amazon. which is stupid as most cultivation novel readers don't even know whether they like a cultivation novel until somewhere between chapter 15 and 30 and that's dependent on other factors such as the length of chapters and how much content was in those chapters. so those are key chapters to hooking in new readers to support you on your patreon or whether they want to read more and by the book off Amazon. your marketing strategy is stupid as you don't show enough content to actually hook in new readers to want to buy it.

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