It's a good start to a story. despite being a little choppy in the first chapter, the writing is fairly well organized and clear in the later chapters. Characters are not completely established, but then, you only need to look at first chapter to know this is a wee bit faster than slow burn, a tad slower than express.. It will make a good read in time. Keep up the good work.
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