Review Detail of DaoistLna7YJ in Torture (from Wattpad)

Ok don't look at my score okay? So no quiet readers. I am looking forward to the book so far! I recommend that you check the grammar, can get really confusing. also, try not to follow the classic cinderella storyline, exaggerate on the characters actions and personalities more, like what has luke done? Why is she so scared? Maybe Andrew is not the prince but in disguise, like he may be the r*pist, and her prince is still nowhere to be seen? Maybe it's his friend/boss? Don't be afraid to be graphic with R18, R*pe etc. You have your warning there, let youself write as graphic/much as you want as long as u are comfortable . Don't repeat nor drag on. Hope this helps😊 if you would like any other tips (( if u want 🧡)) reply. look forward to it 😜❤ ps please don't take this as I don't like it or have judged, I do like it so far. It's only the beginning 😁😁😜😜