Ok don't look at my score okay? So no quiet readers. I am looking forward to the book so far! I recommend that you check the grammar, can get really confusing. also, try not to follow the classic cinderella storyline, exaggerate on the characters actions and personalities more, like what has luke done? Why is she so scared? Maybe Andrew is not the prince but in disguise, like he may be the r*pist, and her prince is still nowhere to be seen? Maybe it's his friend/boss? Don't be afraid to be graphic with R18, R*pe etc. You have your warning there, let youself write as graphic/much as you want as long as u are comfortable . Don't repeat nor drag on. Hope this helps😊 if you would like any other tips (( if u want 🧡)) reply. look forward to it 😜❤ ps please don't take this as I don't like it or have judged, I do like it so far. It's only the beginning 😁😁😜😜

Noooooo! buuut. if she's pregnant, this would explain it would it? the devil won't control her, she is doing it on her own. a demons hormones are intense and they get violent 😳😱😳😱

OMG HEAVEN! Why u stabby stab stab

OMG LOVE THIS!! I am so shipping Hikaru and slender man !! 🥰🥰🥰 IT HAS TO HAPPEN IN SOOME WAAAY! I cannot wait for this book to finish! it's so goooood especially for those monster luvin ppl

yep all good. of course I have this book in my library🤣 it's awesome sauce

why cant I get to the next chapter??? It's Wednesday? weren't we ment to get another one open

Yassssss! Love this booook❤❤❤