1- fast pase story nothing wrong with that. 2- writing style no bad but I would love for more details, like how the MC look and dress, it just helps to imagine the plot while I read. 3- the plot main idea is great, the MC made choices that I couldn't guess where the story was going. Nice π! as a reader, it keep me on my toes. 4- the little stars is for the last 2 chapters I feel like the MC got too aggressive really quickly, like he just went into a tantrum and got bipolar. 5-I love a good fan- fiction, hope this one doesn't get drop
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LIKEThanks for the review, i like when people give me constructive criticism so that i can become a better writer. If you wouldn't mind, could you check our my God-Son in the Multiverse and see what you think. It only has two chapters, but I'd like your opinion on it, even if it's a negative one.