Review Detail of LazyTanaka in Multiverse Internet Cafe(Fanfiction)
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Multiverse Internet Cafe(Fanfiction)
LazyTanaka
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I’m not going to lie this mysterious owner sthick is getting really boring. Every cafe owner fanfic is mysterious or with some crazy background and this isn’t an exception. Next thing I know is that his parents are omniversal rulers and this cafe is his gift from them and they go around adopting children (protagonists) and send them to his cafe as a way to get them to interact. Like this is just getting boring. How in the hell did he just go all serious and critical in a second and just normal in another and say acting is hard. He was just a normal guy from a normal family right. The story and no direction and the aughor is writing as it comes to him with no structure and it shows. This is less Internet Cafe and more what can I fit in a story whenever I want and hope it comes together. Every arc goes too long and how the hell does Diog knows everything and acts all mysterious. Wasn’t he there for the memes and not this past-present mysterious bUllshit. I liked it in the start when it was a normal guy with an internet cafe and not this mysterious bUllshit of a dude doing whatever and having 16 sibling out of the blue. Sorry not sorry.
I mean if you read 'carefully' you will see 15 of them are 'adopted' And... Making a plot is not 'easy' to do, unlike other fanfics which follows anime plots, mine is creating my own 'plot' because unlike the 'others' my work is multiverse where multiple characters join together and they stay at a 'single' place and do bot travel to different anime except for Diog, sometimes Im just getting reference from animes. I know my stories are 'boring' since it still lacks many elements, Im just experimenting here not fully commiting on this fanfic because if I do, I would do it to earn money, not just write here for free.
ValkyrBlack:I’m not going to lie this mysterious owner sthick is getting really boring. Every cafe owner fanfic is mysterious or with some crazy background and this isn’t an exception. Next thing I know is that his parents are omniversal rulers and this cafe is his gift from them and they go around adopting children (protagonists) and send them to his cafe as a way to get them to interact. Like this is just getting boring. How in the hell did he just go all serious and critical in a second and just normal in another and say acting is hard. He was just a normal guy from a normal family right. The story and no direction and the aughor is writing as it comes to him with no structure and it shows. This is less Internet Cafe and more what can I fit in a story whenever I want and hope it comes together. Every arc goes too long and how the hell does Diog knows everything and acts all mysterious. Wasn’t he there for the memes and not this past-present mysterious bUllshit. I liked it in the start when it was a normal guy with an internet cafe and not this mysterious bUllshit of a dude doing whatever and having 16 sibling out of the blue. Sorry not sorry.
I did say powerful couple who are his parents goint to adopt children across the multiverse. The money argument’s answer is simple if you want to you do it. Get a P.atreon. There are tons of amazing crossover/multiversal fanfics out there which even have their own plot while having anime ones as well. Some have even made their own engaging plots in existing stories and even keep intrest up. Read them, take a break and re-evaluate. The sad part is it started out good but then went down the same rabbit hole all generic fanfics go. There are many solution to problems. See what others are doing. In going to be straight with you, right know your story is declining, getting generic and it while get worse. Read your story in one sitting without taking a break. I’ve known some friends who told me it helped them to take in a broder perspective and contemplate what they want to do with the story.
LazyTanaka:I mean if you read 'carefully' you will see 15 of them are 'adopted' And... Making a plot is not 'easy' to do, unlike other fanfics which follows anime plots, mine is creating my own 'plot' because unlike the 'others' my work is multiverse where multiple characters join together and they stay at a 'single' place and do bot travel to different anime except for Diog, sometimes Im just getting reference from animes. I know my stories are 'boring' since it still lacks many elements, Im just experimenting here not fully commiting on this fanfic because if I do, I would do it to earn money, not just write here for free.
join you? I already master this path but as a smart man once said "there's no end to the path". teach me master
LazyTanaka:Im here to share thy lazyness, its still not too late to join me in the path of lazyness
LazyTanaka:Im here to share thy lazyness, its still not too late to join me in the path of lazyness
ValkyrBlack:I’m not going to lie this mysterious owner sthick is getting really boring. Every cafe owner fanfic is mysterious or with some crazy background and this isn’t an exception. Next thing I know is that his parents are omniversal rulers and this cafe is his gift from them and they go around adopting children (protagonists) and send them to his cafe as a way to get them to interact. Like this is just getting boring. How in the hell did he just go all serious and critical in a second and just normal in another and say acting is hard. He was just a normal guy from a normal family right. The story and no direction and the aughor is writing as it comes to him with no structure and it shows. This is less Internet Cafe and more what can I fit in a story whenever I want and hope it comes together. Every arc goes too long and how the hell does Diog knows everything and acts all mysterious. Wasn’t he there for the memes and not this past-present mysterious bUllshit. I liked it in the start when it was a normal guy with an internet cafe and not this mysterious bUllshit of a dude doing whatever and having 16 sibling out of the blue. Sorry not sorry.
