I've only read the first couple of chapters, and it's okay, but the writing is annoying. What I mean is that you write all of the dialogue, the write all of the actions and details happening during the dialogue. It's annoying to have to go back. You should be putting that in between dialogue. On the other hand, I do like the background and lore of the main character and the world
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