I'm here.. just for the yandere....... I don't care if it's a gender bender or even there's many plot hole...... as long it's a yandere "girl"..in the harem or relationship with the Mc .. I'm IN.................😏😏😏

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man this story's premise is so interesting that I feel like I'd be missing out if I didn't read 10 chapters today.7g4f4frf4f5g5g4f4f3f3f3d3d3d3d3d2d2

Here we are yet again to leave a bad review. The story is bad, with lots of plot holes, the grammar is meh. I hope people won't waste their time reading this.

[SAYS IM AT READING STATUS 0, But i have read some of it] Want a yandere story? It's right there. Want a Yandere harem story? Not the right place, Author ruined it with NTR, and with AUTHOR being... well foolish in a way and declaring he/she will not change it, It just ruins the story all together.

That story is well written, long chapters but the beginning is a bit strange,the Mc is interesting but a bit shallow for now, I think he will be more advanced in future. He had more background than most Mc but his personality is a bit broken for now so I need more time to get if it is a good or very good character. But after in chap 3 there is a big WARNING flag that raises. I don't have problems with the fact that the women of this world are horny and had previous relationships but, there is ntr vibe. For exemple bell is a girl in love with the Mc and she is a Yandere, but in the end of chap 3 she almost let hestia kiss her. That is not harem relationship if that goes that way. A harem is one loved by many but they are not shared between them globally. So right now the story seems going to open relationships and have Yuri in it , not for me.

The premise is good but the grammar and sentence structure could use quite a bit of work. The author also tends to write the characters speech and then spend an unusually long paragraph describing what was happening as they said what they said. It makes the story feel a little disjointed The MC is also a bit of a brooding edgelord who likes to hide his face behind a cloak and deny any positive emotions or feelings. Also a male tsundere with a deliberately ‘cold and indifferent’ way of speaking so it can be a little gross. But hey, he genderbended Bell Cranel and made her a super yandere so that’s a plus. Dont believe what people say about NTR btw its just two girls that have no romantic relationship with the MC at the time doing a little bit of slight yuri, nothing heavy.

I've only read the first couple of chapters, and it's okay, but the writing is annoying. What I mean is that you write all of the dialogue, the write all of the actions and details happening during the dialogue. It's annoying to have to go back. You should be putting that in between dialogue. On the other hand, I do like the background and lore of the main character and the world

at first I was very disappointed at the fact there was only 14 chapters. Though seeing the chapters are very long, I was excited. The story does have a lot of in depth information. So if your not into detailed stories then this a warning for you. I'm only on chapter 4 as of now. I have been enjoying reading this but I also happen to be one of the people who dislikes really detailed stories. This story is very interesting and definitely worth trying a chapter or 2. The character development is great and very surprising lol. It is definitely a good story but it's just has to much info for me though I do appreciate that the author does that. For me though, I prefer action and fighting/romance story telling. As of now there are no real fighting happening yet. A few monsters died and all but it's mostly just story building. it does have drama and intense scenes but for me, I like fighting and romance scenes. Though there is definitely romance vibes obviously. It hasn't really bloomed yet from were I'm at. The story does have a lot of things to draw you in but like I said multiple times already. I enjoy fighting and romance. Anyways, Overall this is an awesome story. Filled with drama, dark, and intense story building. Really recommend it to anyone who's interest aligns with this. lastly, I wanna thank the author for posting an awesome story. Thank You.