Review Detail of averious in The Shinobi of Straw Hats

I don’t have a clue how people can read this. The english is frustratingly annoying, and i can barely get through a chapter without wanting to pull my hair out. I thought it would get better over time, or that the guy would proofread what he posts but no. Honestly, author if your reading this just send me chapters and ill edit them so you can post it. Otherwise I enjoy the premise and the character is well written