Fiending for the next chapter

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Dude i think this is one of the best hp fanfictions ever, new ideas and doesnt follow the plot to a t i love it

I don’t have a clue how people can read this. The english is frustratingly annoying, and i can barely get through a chapter without wanting to pull my hair out. I thought it would get better over time, or that the guy would proofread what he posts but no. Honestly, author if your reading this just send me chapters and ill edit them so you can post it. Otherwise I enjoy the premise and the character is well written

Korra

Ok virgin

I’m sure you’d like to **** me you retarded virgin. Hahahahaha

Shut up dumb cunt this is a great story, what an idiot