Review Detail of in The Shinobi of Straw Hats

Alright! I read everything and while the grammar is sub-par, it can be ignored as I did. But the character is extremely underwhelming. He is supposed to be based on Madara. I cannot imagine such a weak guy with his powers. Imagine a Madara that sits on the sidelines and it's impossible to imagine. The character growth is also unrealistic and not steady. It's just not what I pictured after the intro. I tried to be patient but honestly it's just really underwhelming. Please do continue writing though as I am sure you have other fans.