Item: El Viajero
Rating: 4
Author: Lal_CrocusMist

Lal_CrocusMistLv13yr

2021-01-21 11:19

NOTE: Hey there! Thank you for giving this book a chance. O really appreciate the support and effort it receives for the passed days. This is my first book ever written in my second language. It is a slow-paced kind of story, and please bear with it. I like it to be more relatable in someway and to be as worth it as possible. There are hidden gems to discover and as you delve deeper, I assure you that it gets more and more interesting, the kind that would want you to want more. This is not your ordinary fantasy story for I have a lot of things prepared for this book. Thank you for staying! Let's learn, love and discover the world of pure imagination!🤗

El Viajero

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