Review Detail of LordInsanity in My Hormonal Control Quirk

Nice. The writing quality is way better than the other two novels. There aren't any PATREON DEALS every other chapter, which is great. The way you integrate the gamer stuff into it, showing stats and skills, is well done. The story is developing just fine, I'm pretty into it, the MC using his quirk to get girls. The MC is pretty fleshed out, his quirk as well. It's not like the other novel where the MC just gains some OP power right off the bat for no other reasons than finding a harem. The girls so far are fine, cannon girls and no OCs so far, please keep it that way, I'm not particularly good at remembering OC characters other than the MC. What can I say, you really did a good job compared to the other two authors. The first author only had like 3 chapters out, and the other is kind of messy and has a weird cult following for some reason. The writing is really high quality for a webnovel fanfiction, and so is the story. Keep doing a good job.